To me it just sounded like a bunch of annoying sounds and a bass line. Try to get a little bit more of a melody in there instead of just rhythm, if that makes sense.
wow are you jokiN i mean i may have completely halfassed it in 15 minutes but the drums are pretty decent and not jus random sounds its the bassline that is horrible
I see what you were trying to do...
you just didn't quite pull it off. New variations and instruments needed to be introduced earlier, and in the beginning, some sort of tune/melody would have been nice. Also, that scratched noise gets on your nerves really quickly.
This is a good song, the only two complaints I have are that it gets a little repetitive, and I think it could have been balanced a bit better.
Yea i noticed this myself after i posted it. but put lyrics on it. its a tyte song
I like what you have, but as you said, it needs some more length to it and some variation on the piano. I see a lot of potential in this, but it needs some work.
the madness clown
personally it reminded me of the clown from madness. Pretty good song, btw.
It was good...
The beginning was good, but Instead of making it more intense and 'raising the temperature', you made it more obnoxious. Perhaps you could have used something quieter than that noise that went up and down, 'cause that not only annoyed the heck out of me, it also drowned out everything else that DID sound good. BTW, the first person to vote who gave it a 0 is a jerk. It wasn't THAT bad.
yeah im still pretty new. ive only had fl studio for a day.
but not good either the beginning gets boring quickly, so you should have added more stuff earlier, and also changed the tune for one or two parts.
It was good
The only problems were that it was a bit fuzzy and It got pretty repetitive. Great work though.
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